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Hawks Pretty Baby Brac Pack #2

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But my biggest beef is with the stars of this book Can I just say it was creepy to read this It was pedophilia The author knew she was crossing that line because she brought it p in a Oh hey this probably looks like pedo but it totally isn t Isn t that weird scene The top calls himself Daddy carries the other guy around constantly wipes his tears buys him pretty pink things sits him on his lap constantly and takes care of him just like a toddler This would be okay if this was clearly a role playing style of relationship In that context knock yourself out But one of the characters is designated as mildly mentally retarded Maybe I m over sensitive because I ve worked in the disabilities field
Or Maybe It Has 
maybe it has do with the fact that Johnny is clearly childlike in a lot of ways however his characterization like much of the book was sloppy and not put together well But whatever it was it left me feeling creeped out I bought this solely because someone was willing to show that the disabled need and deserve love too I knew going in that there was a really big chance that the book wasn t going to do a good job of it but I didn t think it would go this badlyThis book needed depth it needed characterization it needed editing and spellcheck it needed a couple of beta readers to ask the estions that I as a paying reader was asking like How in hell did a week pass while Johnny was locked in the bedroom and Well if they weren t at the brother s where were they and why didn t Johnny wonder why they were in a strange home And What The Hell Do the hell do guys do for a living other than sit on their asses all day And hey how about Does Johnny even know these guys are werewolves To be fair I wouldn t have known these guys were werewolves and I m not mentally disabled This was a shoddy book and a waste of "money Even worse I paid for this one than the new one from Josh Lanyon Not a good read "Even worse I paid for this one than the new one from Josh Lanyon Not a good read all I completely blame the publisher for not bothering to look at the work If this is the ality Siren Bookstrand is putting out I ll be steering clear of their catalog This is officially one of the worst books I have ever readand trust me I have read a lot of books across all genresI bought this book because the 1st book in this series was so bad that i thought it had to be a flukethe 2nd book had to be bettergive the author a chancemaybe it was just 1st book inexperience This book made my eyes bleed it was even worse that the 1st one and contained main characters with the nicknames of Pretty Baby and Daddyjust think of my dismay when I realized there are 19 books in this seriesI would have given this negative star ratings if I could OMG what did I just readA mildly retarted 18 year old calling his shifter lover Daddy EwwwwwwwwAnd that was just one of the things wrong with this story In the hands of Ven anyone realizesTreated as a simpleton all his life Johnny Stone has never had anything to call his own ntil he meets HawkHawk must keep his emaciated mate safe from a sadistic brother while teaching Johnny to trust him Hawk is ickly running out of time to convince Johnny that he isn’t out to hurt him when his mate inadvertently starts the Okay so I don t normally review Siren books but this one was justwrong Here we have Johnny who s basically his brother s slave and as the book states mildly retarded Then we have Hawk who s of course a bad ass shifter Here s my issueso whether Johnny is actually mildly retarded or not that s the way he was portrayed and then to add in rough shifter sexI have no words Not only that but I m convinced Johnny was actually a 10 yr old girl which just makes all of the above even creepier And to add a shitastic cherry on top of all the other ewwwwness Johnny calls Hawk Daddy Are you fucking kidding me hereI just looked and 1861 people have read this book and it has a 391 average rating HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE I love my kink as much as the next guy but COME ON This is really gross This second book in the series is well connected with the first taking off right where Maverick s Mate left off I really liked the higher level of emotions between the characters the gay pack is beginning to take shape as a group and Maverick and From Volume One "from volume one back adding depth and additional perspectiveHawk is almost as domineering as an alpha but also adds some emotion to this attitude He changes the way he deals with his mate in the course of what happens It shows that he has an ability to learn and adapt I liked that a lot because I thought it made for a better storyJohnny is just so beaten down it made me want to hug him He s had nothing but abuse to the point he truly believes he is worthless even retarded When he comes out of his shell and starts to develop as a person I cheered him along every inch of the way He suffers terribly but his spirit is never broken Absolutely amazing This is a story about change and growth for both characters They help each other see what the other needs and move forward together If you like shifter human interaction with both partners learning about each other and adapting to their new situation you will probably like this book I ve read books that were technically ok but the story wasn t that great And I ve read books where the story was awesome but the writing wasn t all that good For me this book was the worst of both worlds It was shallow writing flat characters and a story that didn t do anything other than take p space on my ereader They say that these stories in the series can be read as stand alones but that "isn t true Mainly because of the sloppy writing A ton of characters stars of their own books are thrust "t true Mainly because of the sloppy writing A ton of characters stars of their own books are thrust the pages with relationships clearly already established but with no real explanation as to who they are Or what they do The only thing I gathered is that these 14 dudes sit around playing video games and pool all day They re referred to as sentries and warriors but they don t actually do anything Hell they don t even turn into wolves. #349 Siren Everlasting Classic ManLove Erotic Alternative Paranormal Romance MM werewolvesHawk Magnar commander of twelve sentry wolves never thought he’d discover his mate in a hospital for an anxiety attack Under the illusion he was going to comfort a young child the alpha’s mate Cecil had befriended he finds a man who needs protection than Different writer and nder a different genre romance rather than erotica I think this particular story could have been as heartbreaking as it is heartwarming Unfortunately seeing as neither of those things happened Hawk s Pretty Baby was just a mishmash of amateurish lazy editing The Kings Sister uncomfortable scenes andnfortunate storytelling I feel bad for saying so especially since the author seems to have such a follow ship but I can t help itHawk and Johnny s a mentally impaired eighteen year old relationship was in my a mentally impaired eighteen year old relationship was in my creepy and very much in the dubious to non consent area of writing Someone might argue aga I really liked this one It was adorable and so sweet I enjoyed this one much than the first one Whereas the first one starts off on the creepy side this one started off rather sweet I enjoyed Johnny and Hawk especially since Johnny was a bit mentally challenged It was just so sweet how Hawk turned into putty when it came to Johnny and anything he did He was a sweetheart to Johnny and catered to him like he should be loved but without the whole condescending I m better than you air There was no way I couldn t love Johnny His obsession with pink will just make you smile and the way the whole pack accepts Johnny and is protective of him from the start made me do a whole bunch of "awwws and left me with a smile on my faceThe only thing I had a problem with well not "and left me with a smile on my faceThe only thing I had a problem with well not a problem but the whole daddy thing just seemed out of character with Johnny and Hawk Hell even Hawk was shocked when he said something related to daddy Still it was a bit weird but besides that I really liked the book I recommend this fluff D I ve read this to give at Brac Pack series another chance BIG MISTAKE This second installment is even worse than the first book HawkJhonny relationship made me feel The Cattlemans Ready-Made Family uneasy because Johnny is a mentally impaired eighteen who behave like a child I had to skip the sex scenes between them because I felt tooncomfortable and what to say about the BabyDaddy nicknames Just creepy And there are too many holes in the plot and too many situations that are not resolved WHAT these guys DO other than hang out in the den and play games all day Badly written thinly veiled pedophilia That about sums p my "thoughts on this oneJohnny is much than just mildly retarded as we re told in "on this oneJohnny is much than just mildly retarded as we re told in opening chapter and the constant references to him as baby little man and kiddo were really starting to disturb me especially since no one addressed the issue or even acknowledged the fact that he s mentally retarded Once I got to the part where Hawk tells Johnny to Fk Daddy s cock after which Johnny starts calling him Daddy I was doneand seriously creeped outshiversI m going to dive right into another book now which will hopefully take my mind off of this one and scrub it permanently from my memory. Ating ritual Will Johnny give Hawk the trust he needs to bind them together or suffer the conseuences that fate’s wicked sense of humor has nleashedNote Each book in Lynn Hagen's Brac Pack collection features a different romantic couple Each title stands alone and can be read in any order However we recommend reading the series in seuential orde. ,